Review of AF

After showing our second rough cut to our class and getting audience feedback we have taken everyones opinion and have some changes to make. It is clear that some of the shots involving George in the cutting room are not clear to the audience and they don't fit in with the story. We will have to discuss this and see how we can change this to either make it clearer or we may have to change this and re-shoot which we do not want to do because we do not know when we will be able to shoot more in the salon due to their busy schedule.

Another point we noticed from our AF is that the ending went down very well but we have decided to take out the final shot of the empty chair as it didnt seem to make sense and wasnt really needed because the ending seemed more effective without it.